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Tuesday 21 June 2011

We should save our waves


Hello my name is Emma. Thank you for taking some of your time to read my blog. I hope you will feel more informed when you have finished reading my blog. I have made this blog to tell you about all the sewage in the sea in Devon and Cornwall. I have also made this blog to tell you about the campaign (Surfers Against Sewage) who is trying to stop the sewage in the sea. If you feel you want to know more about surfers against sewage go to http://www.sas.org.uk/



I have chosen this campaign because Surfers Against Sewage are doing all they can to stop sewage leaking into the sea and harming all the wildlife and animals. I have also chosen this campaign because I do like surfing and swimming and I want people to enjoy it. But they won’t if the sea is full of sewage. People should beware of the sewage in the sea because it is affecting the wildlife on the beaches and also effecting people who are swimming, surfing and paddling in the sea for example a man in Britain died because of the sewage in the sea. This meant that he died because of lots of diseases that have been formed from the sewage. We must do more to help Surfers Against Sewage and help them to stop the sewage flowing into the sea and on the beaches. We should consider making a fine for people who litter on the beach. We should also try to tell people to make equipment that will stop the sewage. We should do this because then it will make the beaches safer and that means that more people will want to visit the beaches.

Why we should stop the sewage.
• because it is damaging wildlife and animals
• it would make the beaches more popular
• It would stop people from getting ill from the sewage.
• it would make the beaches safe for people to swim, surf and paddle
• make more tourist visit beaches

I hope you are now more informed about Surfers Against Sewage and that together we can top sewage going into the sea. At the bottom I would love it if you could give me some evidence of how successful my blog was and if you would like to help. If you could response by answering some short focused questions here they are

Had you ever heard of Surfers Against Sewage before reading?
Do you feel more informed?
Would you now be prepared to support Surfers Against Sewage?
Would you make a donation ?
Would you tell your friends to support surfers against sewage?
Have I changed your attitude about surfers against sewage? If yes how?

Last thing where do you live (home town) and country (if not UK)

Thank you very much. Emma.

1 comment:

  1. 1. No
    2. Yes
    3. Maybe
    4. Maybe
    5. Yes
    6. No, I always agreed with you ;)

    Well done! ;D

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